Photo courtesy of Flickr user Bree Rockbrand
In Bree Rockbrand’s photo titled, ‘Untitled,’ I can see a person touching a tree branch with their left arm. The arm touching the tree appears to have a tattoo of a ship anchor and a short message done by an ordinary ink pen versus tattoo ink. In the picture the person appears to be wearing possbily a sweater with the sleeved rolled up. The main focus of the picture is the arm and tree however in the background there appears to be snow. The tree branches the person is pulling on is bare and thin. In the upper left corner you can see sunlight trying to come through other trees during what appears to be a sunset. The person in the picture also has another ink pen tattoo on their hand but it’s not visible enough to make out a clear image of what it really is. The image gives off a cold winter feeling.
Good details. Careful with your subject-verb agreement: “The tree branches ARE…” And pronoun agreement: Don’t use “their,” use “his” or “her” or “his or her.” 5/5.