Archive for May, 2010

3 of the many things Steve needs to work on

Thursday, May 6th, 2010
  1. Passive Voice“An autopsy is being performed today by the county coroner.”
  2. Using Numbers – ” The jury reached  its verdict in only thirty (30) minutes.”
  3. Paying attention to what I’m writing” The House approved the bill, changing the America(American) system of health care forever. “